I really like how you put a lot of things about your passion and creativity! I wish you double checked your spelling on your acrostic.
Overall, great job!
Amazing poem and i loved how you said electrifying friends. i don't know what that means but it must be nice and not painful... on a scale of 1 to yay joy it would get 12,... yay joy = 11.5
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.